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[Lucie Swansong]

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Edited July 25, 2021 by Lucie Swansong

[Doris Johnsky]

Considering the restraints of SL, the production was not bad.  

The story line?  Not so much.   Granted it's 10 minutes, but Jack went from being a bank robber to bad BUFC hiree to executive for a company.    What IS BU in BUFC?  Jumping around like that with no story makes it hard to care.

 

In the executive meeting, I wouldn't have used a extra with splayed hands. 

Edited July 24, 2021 by Doris Johnsky

[Zatch Ixchel]

This isn’t the right place for this

Edited July 25, 2021 by Zatch Ixchel